OmegaZero (2016-12-04 19:06:12)

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“ALEA! WHATS THE SITUATION?!” Sigs voiced boomed, scaring Splat, Clay, Noah and their partners. “Sir, two elemental crystals have been stolen.” Alea said, the tone of her voice sounded worried. “Which elements?” “Earth and Water.” “…Did the crystal spirits cry for help?” “No, Sir, Some bystanders saw the missing crystals and calls us immediately.” Kid ran off “I NEED TO CHECK ON SOMETHING!” Sigs turned to Kid and yelled, very loudly, “KID?! WERE ARE YOU GOING?!” Alea turned to kid and smiled “Don’t worry about HIS Crystal, Kid, If anything, He’ll give it to…soul…” Kid stopped and ran back to the gang “Speaking of Soul” Kid said, curiously, “Has anyone seen him?” Alea and Sigs both shook their head no, as Clay, Noah, and Splat tried to give Kid the ‘hairy-eyeball.’
Meanwhile, Soul was in a volcano, waiting for the fire protector when finally it appeared “Fuego” soul said, quietly, “Do you know-no…you should know!” “Know what, Soul?” Soul looked at the flames. “The cure for…”
Meanwhile, at the base. An Injured hunter ran to the gang as he said, his voice really raspy. “There’s…A…powerful…werewolf…” Alea jumped from her chair and ran to the hunter (Alea and Sigs look like cats so they’re really small) “Where’s it going?!” Sigs said, sounding very worried. “T-to the hospital…where…Rachel is at!” Everyone gasped. (Order of voices; Drago, Undyne X (MiniPartner)) “CLAY! WHAT DO WE DO?!” “Drago! We FIGHT! NGGGGHH!!!” “Undyne! Settle down! Sir, Do you know why it’s going there?” Kid’s partner, X, Asked. The man shook his head no. Splat looked at everyone “Then, it’s SETTLED! WE’RE GONNA PROTECT RACHEL! NGGH!” Kid looked at Splat and sighed “You sound like your girlfriend.” Splat gave Kid a nasty glare “Don’t you dare tease ME and Undyne” Kid sighed “Well, let’s go!”
At the hospital, Noah, Kid, Splat, and Clay stared at the werewolf creature. (Order of voices: Clay, Drago, Kid, X, Splat, Undyne, Noah, Mettaton) “Ready Drago?” “I’m ready like an Ice dragon who are a chili pepper!” “X, Ready to become one?!” “Like Rachel said, Out of many, one!” “Undyne! Let’s see what all that (painful) training has done for us!” “NGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHH!” “Ready, Mettaton?” “OOoooh yes~!” the four kids started glowing as they all yelled, together “PARTNER FUSION!” One by one, they fused with their partner. Clay turned into a Dragon Cat hybrid (Part humanoid cat, part dragon aka Drago Clay) Kid became a super-hero with the X buster(Kid Danger,) Splat turned into a spear wielding armored moonlain (The armor looks like Undyne’s normal armor, Armored Splat) and Noah somehow gained Mettaton’s armor (To make the pun of NeoNoahGames. NeoNoah.) “Let’s ROCK!” Drago Clay shouted as he dashed to the Werewolf. The werewolf looked at Drago Clay, and snorted, then realized that spears were flying towards it. It swiftly dodged, then released a loud howl. NeoNoah looked at Splat “I think you angered it, Splat.” The Werewolf quickly ran off, running past Kid Danger and Drago Clay. “I don’t think it wants to fight us!” Kid Danger said. “Guys! Try to prevent it from getting to the hospital!” Splat said “If it got to the hospital, it might kill everyone!” Kid whimpered. “OR! It’s after Rachel!” Noah said. Splat saw the werewolf running towards him “Everyone, focus on the werewolf, worry about the cause latter!” Splat said, throwing spears at it. The spears went through the werewolf’s body (order of Voices: Splat, Clay, Splat) “WHAT?!” “Hey, splat, I think the werewolf didn’t like your spear-miss.” “Shut up Clay!” The werewolf glared at everyone. “Uhh guys, we failed.” Splat said, disappointedly, as the werewolf went through the walls. Kid glowed, turning back into his normal form, then he ran, as fast as he could, into the hospital. Kid raced into Rachel’s room to see Rachel, wide awake. “Why did you attack my spirit animal?” Rachel asked, as everyone else followed Kid. “Wait, that werewolf is your spirit animal?!” Clay asked. “Yes! We were separated after I asked R-Tero about…something” Rachel said, her voice shaking. Kid ran to Rachel, and hug her, crying “RMJE…I missed you!” Rachel looked at Kid and smiled “I’m sorry, X. I’ll never leave you again.”
Back at the ruined base, Soul and the elemental cyber elves stared at the dull and dusky land. Soul muttered to himself “Ziemia, protector of earth, Vesi, protector of water and dabka, protector of flames. We’re missing the protectors of Air, Snow, Forest, Metal, and Thunder.” Dabka squealed “What about humanity?!” Ziemia looked at Dabka “What ABOUT humans?!” Vesi squealed “He means that there’s more elements!” Soul chuckled “thanks for reminding me.” Vesi squealed again “Aren’t we missing Poison, Darkness, and Nightmare?” Soul looked down at Vesi then back at the dusky land “Poison is in our grasp but nightmare and darkness…they have those two elements. But they’ll never take the light element.”

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Dorklard (2016-12-06 01:44:12)

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1/10 The story is once again all over the place, Even more grammatical errors this time and even less world building. What are elemental crystals. Who stole them? You could have had atleast included that at the beginning other wise it just makes it seem like this "story" was half assed. Which it most certainly was. And even more Undercancer? I've said it once and i'll say it again. Take it to Deviantart or Wattpad. ＮＯＴ　ＨＥＲＥ.

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OmegaZero (2016-12-06 17:53:13)

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Wow. If you weren't PAYING ATTENTION It was Soul who TOKE them. Also, thank you for your hate. Your hate is what gives me motivation in life.

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SlenderDude12 (2016-12-07 20:16:22)

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your sarcasm isn't sarcasm

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OmegaZero (2016-12-13 08:16:19)

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No, I LOVED to be hated! It makes me feel so dead inside and makes me wanna hug a skull. a PLUSH SKULL!

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NintendoDude (2017-01-07 06:31:15)

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This is wack.

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Dorklard (2017-01-09 00:53:29)

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That's an insult to all things wack. This is a ing STD in written form.

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