demonhunter (2012-09-19 06:30:03)

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Slowly it came
Grinding crashing
Through this world with jaws gnashing
The green horse panting as it roared
While everyone in that world snored
It stole and pillared without regret
Its coming was ever imminent
It cried through every hoofbeat
Striving to end a heartbeat
Its phantom rider at the reins
Lashing the whips again and again
The horse reared up, it caught its breath
And roared FEAR ME
FOR I AM DEATH

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demonhunter (2012-09-19 06:32:05)

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Tell me what you think

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Ilurv (2012-09-23 01:10:30)

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I like it, especially the end.

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Tyanna (2012-09-23 16:30:39)

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This is about a Stallion?

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