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SongBlaze (2013-02-16 23:44:32)lol that's great. i hope this is just a story because the REAL reason that i lost a life will come next in blazestar's secret part 3.
i LOVE the story *thumbs up* 
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Ilurv (2013-02-18 15:35:20)The gathering a four trees continues without nightclan. 'thats alright,' thought Sandpelt, 'man wouldnt have showed up anyways...'
Things in the camp start heating up as cats tend to their wounds and blazestar fully recovers. She steps out of her den with a firece glare. "What happened out there?" she asks.
Rainpaw came up, his ear torn, and said, " the gathering fell apart, you were attacked!"
Blazestar stands rigged,"Who...attacked me..."
Rainpaw blurts out quickly, "I thought it was a rouge...but, it looked like a warrior from iceclan," *winces*he sure battled like one,"
Blazestar turns red with anger as she remembers the many disputes the two clans had had against each other. but to attck her on the night of a gathering? Blazestar unsheaths her claws, leaving deep gourges in the moss at her paws.
As crowfire and Whitestream calm the enraged leader, the iceclan leader herself stuts into camp flanked b the dusk patrol.
blazestar, seeing the newcomer, screeches in newborn fury, "You mangy FLEABAG! When i get my paws on you-" she tries to lung at the iceclan leader but is held back by sandpelt and (Munsterclaw?).
Blazestar struggled against the cats restraining her. Crowfrost rushed up to her with herbs, but she refused to eat them with a snarl.
Thunder sddenly rummbles, and the clan glances up to see clouds rolling in, followed by firece winds that ripped at thier pelts.The dark night just got darker. Sandpelt turns to blazestar and hisses, "Starclan is angry!!!" the rest of the clan bristles to match the cold seeping into them.
Sandpelt turns angrily to Silverstar, "Do you see what youve done?!" he asks, fury and hatred directed toward the iceclan leader.
The iceclan leader opens her mouth in disgust to reply, when an angry, white hit bolt of lighnting strikes a tree. it begins to rain. The tree groans and whines, then falls, about to land on the iceclan leader.
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It was a gloomy newleaf night, a gathering to be held soon. The sun peeked over the horizon, threatining to set, and all was calm on the trip to fourtrees. Then, a screech caught the clans attention, and they turned to see Blazestar (songani) rolling in the dirt with a rouge.
The rouge strikes a fatal blow, sending Blazestar flying. Crowfire (conner10) and Whitestream (Ilurv) yowl, terrified and shocked, too stunned to move as the rouge batters her. She lays there, her vision blurring, until she sees nothing, and is still.
Sandpelt (garfield) leaps at the rouge, spitting and hissing with rage, and is soon followed by Crofire.
"Welcome to Nightclan," Sandpelt screeches, sinking his fangs in deep.
More cats snap out of the confused state to join in on the attack, just as Sandpelt breaks off to see to Blazestar.
"Blazestar?!" he asks, breathless. "Oh, starclan, shes losing a life!" Sandpelt hauls Blazestar onto his back, carrying her back to camp and leaving the cauterwailing behind.
The rest of the clan returns, and whispers spread through the clan like wildfire...the rouge is dead...Sandpelt ate it...They drowned it in the river...all roumors spread by eager apprentices.
Sandpelt stands by Blazestars den, Crowfrost was inside helping Blazestar to her feet. She isnt well, she lost her first life, whichis always the hardest to give up.
Crowfire comes up to see if Blazestar is up. Sandpelt explained the situation, then asked about the rouge.
"The rouge is gone." Reported Crowfire.
"Where did it go?" Sandpelt flexed his claws.
"Well, not home, and not to Starclan." answered Crowfire, his fur flattening.
"...Its dead?" Sandpelt asked after a pause.
Crowfire dipped his head, replied "yes," and padded away.
The rest of the night drags on, the gathering missed, the moon high in the sky.There were clouds that night, They would cover and uncover the moon depending on Blazestars current status.