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little5 (2014-07-28 21:40:07)Hilarious. 9001/10
"Fola wrapped his hands around Chad's hands, and took the whole piece of chicken inside his mouth and sucked on the skin of the chicken, Chad gasped at the hot sight. Fola slowly sucked on the chicken, then released it from his mouth,"
LOL! This is the most lol-worthy part!
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AngelRibbons (2014-07-28 21:42:40)Lol, I looooove this~ <3
Kira, you've inspired me. ;D;
Well written. +1
Super_~_Junior. (2014-07-28 21:45:02)I am happy you like Aminabby<3
carlos11 (2014-07-28 22:25:52)Nauseating.
Language is a tool for efficient communication. The internet is a tool for fast communication. Do not defy both intents by posting incoherent writing.
Jason2k14 (2014-07-28 23:01:46)After reading Part 1, I decided not to read this. I don't know what to say anymore.. Chad and Fola? Gey relationship?..
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PokeCat (2014-07-29 00:40:29)I can't even fathom how much I hate this.
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Make My Heart Beat Part I
This story may offend people against Bixsexual/Homosexual relationships so NO HATEFUL HOMOPHOBIC COMMENTS THANK YOU!
This story contains Plaza-ships, these users aren't not REALLY online dating. The following is pure fiction!
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"Mmmm~mmmmm... Good morning, Chaddyswaggy~" was the first thing Chad heard, when he opened his eyes, he saw Fola smiling leaning over him, Fola kissed Chad's forehead and rubbed his stomach, Fola & Chad didn't cuddle often, they both tried to enjoy the feel of each others skin. "Good morning Fola baby." Chad said in a husky voice, Fola smirked and got out of bed "I am surprised we even woke up this earlier." Fola smirked and stood beside Chad's side of the bed "True, now go get me some coffee." Chad then spanked Fola on the ass, Fola giggled like a shoolgirl and went into the kitchen. Chad winced at the light of the powerful rising sun, Chad then got off of the bed and walked into the living room, grabbing a piece of Fried Chicken from the fresh bucket of KFC, Chad then chewed on the godly chicken, "Mmmm~ You got some of that grease on your lips baby~" Fola said in a seductive tone as he slowly walked over to Chad, very much swaying his hips while he walked. Chad almost dropped his chicken, Fola wrapped his hands around Chad's hands, and took the whole piece of chicken inside his mouth and sucked on the skin of the chicken, Chad gasped at the hot sight. Fola slowly sucked on the chicken, then released it from his mouth, Chad immediately rammed his tongue down Fola's throat, after a few passionate kisses, Fola stopped and started eating the chicken, both of them kissing and mixing chicken around in each others mouths, the taste of KFC and love was all they tasted, the smell, the feel, all of it so real to their senses. Fola grabbed the bucket of KFC held it over his head, and turned it upside down, hot chicken and grease ran all over his body, Chad licked his lips and immediately jumped on Fola.
Three hours later, Chad & Fola both took a shower and washed up, and got themselves ready for the day. "Yo, bruh thanks for listening to me.. But I gotta go home bruh, I need to talk to my wife." Chad said as he put on his hat and black hoodie, "Aight.. I hear ya bruh.. But.." Fola sighed and looked down at the ground, "L-Let.. Let me come with you.." Fola looked Chad in the eyes, "I need to say sorry to Alex." Chad sighed and crossed his arms over his chest, "Fo-" "Chad," Fola cut Chad off, "I need to do this. Please, you owe me." Fola said as he grabbed his shiny glittery red high heels and red glittery jacket, "Aight.." Chad sighed in defeat, "Let's gooooooo!" Chad smiled, Fola grabbed Chad's hand as they left the apartment.
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Chad & Fola slowly entered the house, Chad was surprised to see Alex still has her stuff at the house, She didn't leave yet... Thank god. Chad thought to himself, as Chad & Fola walked into the dining room, they saw Alex sitting there at the kitchen table with a blank face expression, she was staring at the ground sitting formally, both hands over the table. Fola gasped, Chad sighed "Alex..." he said as he slowly walked closer to the table. Alex started laughing, "Do you know.. How.. Much pain I've endured?.." she said in a quiet tone. Chad tried fighting back the urge to cry "Alex.. Baby, I know I did you wrong.. I am so sorry.." Alex smiled and looked at Fola, "Don't be sorry. I am not." Alex slowly raised her right hand from under the table, tightly holding a double action Revolver in her hand she quickly put the gun to the side of her head, Fola and Chad ranto her side "ALEX DON'T! ALEX NO-"
"BANG" and the sound of her body hitting the floor was the only sounds to be heard. Fola & Chad covered in her blood and gun residue. Chad fell to his knees and began sobbing dramatically, Fola stood there in shock at the sight of his lovers dead wife. Both of them couldn't speak, couldn't move, couldn't do anything. After 10 or 12 minutes passed, the police busted in the door screaming for everyone to put their hands up.
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Amina was at a cafe, with her girlfriend Meia. Just casually chatting and enjoying the calm and relaxing day. "Excuse me ma'am" A tall, handsome, well dressed black haired asian man said, Amina turned her head to look at the man "Uh?... Do-Do I know you?" Amina said with a confuse expression on her face, the man smiled and bowed to her, "Ah, sorry miss. I am Detective Park, this is my partner, Detective Kim." the shorter blonde handsome man (Detective Kim) slightly bowed and said, "Hello miss." Amina smiled and nodded her head and softly said, "Uh.. How can I help you detectives?" Detective Park sighed "Is Fola Olaforma your bother?" Amina nodded her head "Yes sir. Why ask?..." Detective Kim sat down next to Amina "We believe your brother has committed murder.. Does he have any connection to Alex Witmore? Any.. Bad feelings? Any arguments?" Amina gasped and covered her mouth with her hand "Oh god. I mean-him and Alex didn't get along, bu-but he would never do this!" Amina begain to sob, "Mrs.Olaforma, please calm down. Did they ever have any fights?" Detective Park gently put his hand on Amina's shoulder, "Uh... I... I shouldn't tell you, I-I love my bother... I can't.." Amina covered her face with her hands, "Amina, I know it's hard. But you need to tell us okay?" Detective Kim coaxed softly. Amina nodded her head "Okay... Fo.. Fola, has been with Chad.. Without her knowing. Alex," Amina begain to sob even harder "Alex found out.. A few days ago.. And she-she.. She was so upset. I told her, that.. That she should leave Chad. An-and.. I didn't know he was going to do this I swear I didn't..." Detective Park exchanged glares with Detective Kim, "Thank you for your help." Detective Park bowed, Detective Kim got up from the set "Take it easy okay?" Detective Kim said softly, Amina nodded her head.
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Chad sighed, his wrists buring from the handcuffs, his hands cuffed to the table in the interrogation room, dim light hanging over the table, stone walls, concrete floors, and an extremely uncomfortable metal chair. Chad's eyes immediately darted two the door as it opened. Detective Park & Kim walked into the room with a folders in their hands. "Well, well, Mr.Witmore. Seems like you wanted a certain someone dead." Detective Park said while smirking. Chad frowned his eyebrows in confusion "What you talkin' about bruh?" Detective Kim laughed, "You see.. Chad, we know about your affair. And, we also know about the life insurance policie you claimed on your wife 3 months ago, I don't know about you. But... 50k and a mistress sounds like motive to me." Detective Park smiled and clapped his hands, "Ah, exactly. You wanted that skank out of you way, you wanted your mistress, and your money. The money that greedy skank wanted to take from you." Detective Park leaned over the table, "You know what I think, I think you shot the skank to teach her a lesson, not to pry into your business." Detective Park said barely above a whisper, "THE HELL NO! BRUH, I LOVED ALEX. WHY WOULD I KILL HER IF I LOVED HER!?!?" Chad screamed in annoyance, "You have everything to gain from killing her." Detective Kim said, "Even if we don't get a confession. We still have a enough proof to throw your ass in Jail until your old and gray." a tall handsome man walked into the room, Detective Park smiled "Ah, District Attorney Cho. How nice to see you." District Attorney Cho smiled and laughed, "What da hell man! You can't throw me in Jail for a crime I didn't do!" Chad again, screamed in annoyance. "You clearly don't understand how the law works Mr.Witmore. I have more than enough proof that you, and your little boyfriend, killed Alex Witmore." District Attorney Cho said, "Get this scum bag down to the tumbs, we're arraigning this scumbag first thing in the morning." Detective Park & Kim both nodded their heads before taking Chad to central booking for the murder of Alexandra Witmore.
Woooop! Part II, ah-ha~ I hope you guys liked it. Thanks to little5 & PhantomR for helping with parts of the beta in this~~~ Thanksssss. Comments are very much appreciated. I am not sure if I will able to post part III tomorrow, but eh. I'll try~ Thanks anyways!
Until next time~
Make My Heart Beat Part III
2014-07-30 06:49:10