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Make My Heart Beat. Part V.
Started by Super_~_Junior.
(2014-07-31 01:57:12)
Super_~_Junior. (2014-07-31 01:57:12)
! WARNING !

This story may offend people against Bixsexual/Homosexual relationships so NO HATEFUL HOMOPHOBIC COMMENTS THANK YOU!

This story contains Plaza-ships, these users aren't not REALLY online dating. The following is pure fiction!
Make My Heart Beat Part I
Make My Heart Beat Part II
Make My Heart Beat Part III
Make My Heart Beat Part IIII] 73053[/forum]

Chad closed his eyes, before taking a step forward.. "STOP!!" someone immediately ran over to Chad, Chad sighed and looked at the man standing in front of him, "Who are you?" Chad asked in a low quiet voice, "I am the person who's going to prevent you from going to Jail." the man blankly stared at Chad, his face unreadable, who was this guy? Isn't Mr.jackson his lawyer? Chad slowly took the noose off his neck and climbed down, "I don't need your help.." Chad sighed and looked at the ground, the man laughed "Stop self-loathing. Remember, if you go to Jail. So does Fola." the man smiled and sat down on the couch on the other side of the room, Chad continued to stare at the ground "Leave us alone." Chad said barely above a whisper. The man snorted, "You're just as damn selfish as a heard. One sad bastard eh?" Chad clinched his fist, "YO! Bruh, you got no right, commin' up in here telin' me I do yo help! Just get lost bruh. Get lost." The man sighed, "You don't understand. Let me explain this to you, if Fola goes to jail.. Do you even know what will happen to him? He's only 19. Do you even realize or care what will happen to your own damn brother?" Chad shouted "GOD DAMN IT! Of course I know.. But-I-I.. I can't face him. I can't do this." The man rolled his eyes "Listen, I don't give af if you diddled your own damn little brother, okay? So stop whining about it, and get your damn life together." The man smirked, "YOU GOT SOME DAMN BALLS BRUH! COMMIN' UP IN HERE, TELLIN' ME WHAT TO DO WITH MA LIFE!? YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW ME BRUH!" Chad glared at the man, he laughed "I know everything about you. And, I know exactly why you're here. I know why you want to die, I know why your wife killed herself, I know why you don't want to see Fola. I know everything." Chad gasped, "Wait-wait, didn't Alex kill herself cause of-of me?" The man laughed and shoke his head, "No, she killed herself because..." The man abruptly stopped speaking and smirked, "Because of what?! What are you talking about!? Tell me damn it!" Chad screamed, the man smiled "Have fun in jail." the man said, before getting up and leaving the room, Chad stood there completely dumbfounded by this strange guy.. Who the hell was he? Better yet, what the hell was he talking about? If he really knows why Alex killed herself.... Chad has a right to know?... Right!? It was his wife! The woman he loved cheated on and married! Yes, Chad did very much now regret cheatting on her. Especially now that she's gone, but this guy... Did he really know why Alex is dead?

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Amina sighed, "You have no proof of me killing or kidnapping anyone." Detective Kim smiled "Actually we do. We found records linking you to Eric, and the sister of the doctor who saw him." Amina smirked and shoke her head "No, no. Sweetie, you have it all wrong. I didn't do those things, yes. I have ties with those people. But, I was only raising Eric cause he asked me to for part of his test." Detective Kim frowned his eyebrows in cofusion "H-he? Who's he?" Amina laughed "Hell if I know who he is. Don't expect me to say anything else either, I have a right to a lawyer. And," Amina sat down in the chair, " I want one, now." Detective Kim nodded his head, sighed and then left the room. "Shame she asked for a lawyer." Detective Park smiled, "What's so funny? Yahhh, why are you smiling you ass?" Detective Kim sighed. "This guy, I highly doubt he even exists. She just wants to avoid going to jail." Detective Park stated as he sat down at his desk. "Annnnnnddddd, what if he's real? It's better to look into it. Better save then sorry." Detective Park nodded his head, "Okay. I'll look into it, you. Keep an eye on her."

***********

Fola sat there quietly in his cell, staring at the ceiling, "Do you remember anything about when you were taken away from your original family?" Detective Park questioned. Fola shoke his head "Hell no. If I did, why tf would I have done my own bro?" Fola closed his eyes tightly. Detective Park sighed "You being a jackass isn't going to help us figure out who the hell kidnapped you." Fola immediately snapped his gaze to Detective Park, "You think I want your damn help? No! I want to get out of here." Detective Park rolled his eyes "Fine. Help yourself." Detective Park sighed, and then turned around. "WAIT..." Fola yelled, Detective Park smirked and turned around "Yes?" Fola sighed, "I think.. When I was a kid. We lived in this small weird house for awhile.. There was this guy there." Detective Park nodded his head, "I don't really remember anything. He just seemed weird, when I asked Amina about it.. She told me that I shouldn't worry about it. I don't know if it's helpful or whatnot.." Fola sighed and laid back down in his bed, Detective Park then left.

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"Finish looking for our mystery man?" Detective Park said as he sat down at his desk. Detective Kim nodded his head, "I ran down through the records for that house you said Eric mentioned, I think I might have something." Detective Park nodded his head, "What do you got?" "Now, a few months after Eric moved out, there was a small robbery there, right? They lifted finger prints from the place. One index finger print found in the kitchen, made a pop in the system." Detective Park nodded his head, "And, who is it?" Detective Kim sighed "Well, that's the thing. We don't know." Detective Park laughed, "What do you mean 'we don't know', you said they made a pop in the system. The guy was arrested but his name wasn't taken?" Detective Kim passed Detective Park the folder, "The odd thing is, the finger prints in the system were of a person who died. 5 years before Eric even lived there." Detective Park rolled his eyes "So, you're saying this a crap load of nothing?" Detective Kim shoke his head "No! I looked into it, obviously. I talked to the guys sister. She said some weird guy -who makes the description Eric described-, before her brother died, was hanging around their house at strange hours." Detective Park smiled "So? What does that mean?" Detective Kim coughed "Well, maybe. He took the guys prints and put them in the house." Detective Park laughed, "WOW! So, let me run this down... You think some random guy, took someones prints BEFORE he died, and put them inside Eric's old house for no reason?" Detective Kim sighed "No! Not for no reason.... I just, haven't found out why yet. But you have to agree that this is weird!" Detective Park nodded his head "Yeah, it's weird. But it's not soild proof of anything, get hard proof of it and why, and find this 'weird' guy and yeah. We can do something."


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Chad laid there, in bed. Staring at the ceiling.. What was going on? Who was that guy?... What the hell is going on? Chad closed his eyes, all of this at once.. The death of his wife, finding his brother... The stress was too much. Chad just wanted to know why, why all of this HAD to happen to his wife, to him... Maybe... If he would have protected Fola, this would have never happened...



Pfffffffffffffttttt. Another cliff hanger, lol. Hope chu lykd it. ;D

Until next time~


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This post has been edited one or more times, the last time was:
2014-08-03 08:14:16

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