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Make My Heart Beat. Part 4.
Started by Super_~_Junior.
(2014-07-30 00:48:16)
Super_~_Junior. (2014-07-30 00:48:17)
! WARNING !

This story may offend people against Bixsexual/Homosexual relationships so NO HATEFUL HOMOPHOBIC COMMENTS THANK YOU!

This story contains Plaza-ships, these users aren't not REALLY online dating. The following is pure fiction!
Make My Heart Beat Part I
Make My Heart Beat Part II
Make My Heart Beat Part II

Chad laid there, in the warm hospital bed. He remembered what happen in court, but... It didn't make sense, Eric was dead.. Was this just a bush league tactic? Was the DA trying to mentally screw with Chad? But, what about those folders he gave the jury.. Was it proof of Fola well, Eric really being alive? All the different thoughts and wonders spinning in Chad's mind like a whirlpool. He tried to push the thoughts out of his mind, but his brain just wouldn't stop.. was Fola REALLY Eric?.. How could that even be? Eric died... Given, he never saw the body. But Eric did die. All the pain becoming to real, if Fola was really Eric?..... Doesn't that make Chad even more sick than before? Being in love with his own little brother? Damn, how gross was that? But the even worst part is... That he didn't find it gross at all. He always thought Eric died from the shooting, Eric was only 2 years old.. Chad was walking home from school with Eric, and someone tried to rob them. Chad managed to stop the guy from stealing anything, but while he was struggling with the man, the man pulled the trigger on his gun, and it hit Eric right in his left shoulder. Chad immediately ran to his brothers said, the shooter got away. Chad carried his brother to the hospital, the nurse told him that his brother died in surgery. Out of shame, Chad told his parents that their brother was kidnapped, not murdered. When his parents called the police and told them there son was missing, they searched for weeks, but found nothing. Chad still didn't tell them about his death, but it was odd... Wouldn't the police would have told his parents if his brother was dead? Wouldn't they have checked the hospital? Chad never thought it was odd, until now. Maybe... His brother never did die, just.. Got lost?.. Stolen?... It didn't make sense! He would have known if is brother never died. But.. He didn't know..

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Amina sat there in the interrogation room, blankly staring Detective Kim in the eyes. "Eric isn't your real brother... Then how did your parents get him?" Detective Kim calmly asked, Amina sighed and looked at the ground "I don't know. It was so long ago.. I always thought Fola, well.. Eric, was my real brother." Amina sighed and slowly ran a hand through her hair, "But, wouldn't you notice your mother being pregnant?" Detective Kim questioned. "Ah... I wasn't in America at the time, I was visiting friends of mine somewhere else.. And I came home, and there he was." Amina gently put her hands on the table " I don't know what you want me to say, I don't know anything." Detective Kim nodded his head, "Okay." Amina sighed "Can I leave?" she slowly got up from the chair and grabbed her bag, Detective Kim nodded his head. Amina then left the room, "Her story doesn't make sense." Detective Park said in a low voice "There is no proof of her being out of the country at the time, so why did you cut her loose?" Detective Kim smirked, "She'll lead us straight to whoever helped plan kidnap Eric Witmore."


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Amina frantically walked down the street, into a vacant alley, the loud sounds of her leather-boot-heels hitting the concrete echoed through the walls, "I TOLD YOU TO MAKE SURE THE DAMN INVESTIGATORS DIDN'T FIND OUT ABOUT ERIC." Amina yelled at the man standing in the alley, "You have to understand I couldn't control it." He sighed, Amina slapped him across the face "You incompetent tool! What the hell do you expect me to do with the police find out, HUH! Who's going to go to Jail? Not you! When I tell you to do your damn job, you do it god damnit!" The man sighed rubbed his check, "If I were you... Hitting me wouldn't me a wise idea.." He threatened, Amina laughed "What are you gonna do about it huh?!" he lifted his right hand to hit Amina, she grabbed his wrists and twisted it and then kicked him the back of his left knee, which made him drop to the floor, "You listen here, ass wipe. You do what I say, you try to fix this damn mess! And do it now!" Amina shouted, the man got up from the grounded and nodded his head before leaving the alley. Amina sighed, and put both her hands on her hips, she then turned around "I wouldn't move if I were you." Detective Kim said, with his gun pointed straight in Amina's face.

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Detective Park smirked, "How'd you know she'd lead you to the guys who have proof of her breaking the law?" Detective Kim laughed, "Call it a huntch." Detective Park smiled. They both entered the darken cold interrogation room, Detective Kim sat down in the chair beside the man, "So, tell us what you know about Amina Olaforma." The man sighed, "Sh.. She'll kill me if I say anything.." Detective Park put his hand on the guy's shoulder, "We promise you.. She won't hurt you. We'll put you in a private cell. We'll even have the DA cut a deal for you." The man sniffed and looked up at Detective Park "R-Really?" Detective Park nodded his head. The man sighed, "A long time ago... There was this kid, he got shot. My sister, was a doctor at the hospital.. I was doing petty drug runs for a cartel..." the man sighed and the continued, "The leader of the cartel, he had a wife. Amina, was married to him. And.. She wanted to have a kid, but... She couldn't. Sooo, she had me ask my sister to doctor the files to say the kid never showed up. We took him after he was all packed up.. And then, her husband found out.. She, she killed him in his sleep... She stabbed him to death, and.. She then sat his body on fire. Everyone else in the cartel thought his death was from a rival cartel, but.. It wasn't. Then, she broke up the cartel.. And then started do gun smuggling for some industrial company, her parents found out about the child. Eric, who she named Fola. And then.. Her parents just, disappeared.." Detective Kim nodded his head, "Did you ever see what happened to her parents or?" the guy shook his head "Nah, but I am more than sure that she wacked 'em." Detective Park patted him on the back, "Okay. We'll talk to our DA." Detective Park & Kim both left the room, "I believe him." Detective Park said, Detective Kim nodded his head. "Let's go find some more proof to link his story to, then pick her up."


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Chad laid there, still in the exact same spot, his eyes blood shot red, tears stained his cheeks. If Eric really is Fola... He was hurting his own brother, all this time.. He was violating his own brother, but he loved it.. And it made him a monster.. Chad slowly got out of bed, he took of his shirt, tied it like a noose.. hanged it over the window curtain rod, grabbed a chair, stood on top of it, tied the noose around his neck, and then shut his eyes.



LOL, This isn't the end of the storry!!! So calm down. Thanks for comments and whatever, since I usually post gifs at the end.. I would like to show everyone my brand new Chola banner. I hope you guys like it.

Until next time~
#SpreadTheCholaLove



Make My Heart Beat Part V

This post has been edited one or more times, the last time was:
2014-07-31 08:57:51

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little5 (2014-07-30 01:10:40)
#SpreadTheCholaLove

What a cliff hanger. .o. +1
Spector (2014-07-30 01:21:59)
*Fola and Chad ignore everyone apart of this fanfic*
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Paradox wuz here.
I'm a player.
AngelRibbons (2014-07-30 01:34:12)
WOOOH THIS WAS AWESOME!
I'm an evil , bby~
PokeCat (2014-07-30 14:15:07)
Dear god why.


JUST WHY.
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Super_~_Junior. (2014-07-30 20:04:33)
Cuz ChangMin.
jEsUs ChRiSt
 

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